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1.) I understand why this article is included, but I had to get to the fourth or fifth paragraph to figure this out. I think we should mention the Duke in..."

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Created page with "Some thoughts:<br> 1.) I understand why this article is included, but I had to get to the fourth or fifth paragraph to figure this out. I think we should mention the Duke in..."

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Some thoughts:<br>

1.) I understand why this article is included, but I had to get to the fourth or fifth paragraph to figure this out. I think we should mention the Duke in the opening paragraph so it is clear why this article is here.<br>
2.) It sounds weird referring to the Duke as "Travis" in the article... While I understand that members of the monarchy are to be referred to by first name (only), saying "Travis did this" and "Travis did that" sounds somehow like a what-I-did-on-my-summer-vacation story, when this story is much more serious. Maybe we use "McHenry" here, if only because of the tone (?). And we mention him as this in the opening paragraph somewhere.<br>
3.) The picture, however, is adorable. [[User:Baron of Bastanchury|Baron of Bastanchury]] ([[User talk:Baron of Bastanchury|talk]]) 14:10, 5 May 2018 (UTC)

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Baron of Bastanchury: Created page with "Some thoughts: 1.) I understand why this article is included, but I had to get to the fourth or fifth paragraph to figure this out. I think we should mention the Duke in..."

Baron of Bastanchury: Created page with "Some thoughts:
1.) I understand why this article is included, but I had to get to the fourth or fifth paragraph to figure this out. I think we should mention the Duke in..."